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                                                                * Adverbs*

                                                        * Tuesday   5    may*

                                                                      * 2016*

How	Where	When
quickly	outside	yesterday
softly	Inside	eventually
gently	later	lnl de
gully	loudly	always
quisa lee	early	loudly

*She Went To Hospital and she was Happy*  she very happy because she did *not go To school*

*And ron mum kam and mas very sad***   

Zoos are evil and disgusting

Zoos are evil and disgusting.

The Zoos are so not good and the Animals should Be Free and kept in the wild and I am so sad For the Animals. We Should be kind to the animals.

The zoo is is so evil one of the tigers attacked the lady and sadly she had been killed

And the Animals  Should be in Survive in the wild and I am so sad For the Animals and I am love the Animals in the Zoo bet they Should be Free

the Auckland Zoo is One not good Zoo in the World and the  Animals Should Be Free in the Wild one Animal that I like is The lion’s and BET THE AUCKLAND ZOO IS SO NOT GOOD AT LO

And wan I am 30 I am going to  go and gat  look  vo the Animals”

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The Book Came to me and my Cat wais go for a long Time  and it is sad ! and it is on Jake's Birthday is well that wal not good and men dad went day too the army and he is going for a long day

When I was 12 my dad Came Back and I was so happy  

And  then She purl the Book on Fire as time went She and Jake got older Jaek when too school is two and  he join school

Jake want to school and i am 14

And my mum she what to hospital and she is not too  good

And she is sake tam so not happy for  my mum dad is at home no the. Is at it again it is make my dad get sake  and he is going to hospital we got too go to Nanaa’s

No  dad why are you get Sake you are going too lev Nana’s is she Dend no  ho ok .

Is it the book no I pot the book in fire NO ! you do not Have and that why ? rone mum and dad mat going too Dand no I am so Sorry I no not on ti is ok the som Hppt too me Dad ? we are going to miss you

Addll yes you net too . Taught Jake too Fighting yes i'm going too good  he is gone too god and mum yes no came on it is time to go Home ok Bye mum and dad . and te ti is 20991 that is the day that they did .When I was 12 my dad Came Back and I was so happy  

And  then She purl the Book on Fire as time went and  She and Jake got older Jaek when too school is two and  he join school

Jake want to school and i am 14

And my mum she what to hospital and she is not too  good

And she is sick so not happy for  my mum dad is at home no  he.  Is not going back  again it is make my dad get sick  and he is going to hospital we got too go to Nana’s

No  dad why are you get Sick you are going to leave Nana’s is she Dead no  oh ok .

Is it the book no I pot the book in fire NO ! you do not Have and that why ? rone mum and dad mat going too Dand no I am so Sorry I no not on ti is ok the som Hppt too me Dad ? we are going to miss you

Addll yes you net too . Taught Jake too Fighting yes i'm going too good  he is gone too god and mum yes no came on it is time to go Home ok Bye mum and dad . 20991 that is want they Did . and I mes theme for I long time

And that my Nanan she is in hospital and is so sick come  on we are going to School and we are going  to Maths addll can you pek me up from School  ok oh and  Jake  yes we are going to see Nanan watn it is hometime  ok Bye sis bye boy  you have a good day

At School you too

Hi addll hi sam are you ok no my Nana is in hospital why she is Sick  I am so Sorry ti si ok my mu  she can pek you gaz up and Jake too  too the hospital and we can get Food  and we are at the hospital she is in 109

We are hi Nana I no you are going to Make ti and me and jake we are going too miss you bye  

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Narrative Writing : to Entertain entrtain

Narrative writing : to Entertain entertain

Topic : Imagine  things Start to mysteriously disappear .

One thing

disease , then another and another .Write  to tell ( narrate )  the Story

1 Brainstorm and Plan you i deas .

2 Engage you

Audience with  an interesting introduction

Parts of a Narrative

Orientation : Setting ‘ Characters

Conflict : Problem Resolution : Problem

Resolved

Features of a Narrative .

Written in Past tense Separate ideas into paragraphs Add detail to your ideas

Use of  adjectives ; Place  defoe houns.

Ues of Adverbs  

Ues of Figurative language :  Similes  mrtprs,

Different  forms of

Personification  Punctuation : speech marks , Commas

Compound Sentences

Complex     Sentences

Short snappy  Sentences .

Different Sentence Sentences

C.g Design with Time

Design   With adele's live

Depin With a diuh

Design With a preposition

Hyperhole

( Hyperbole )

A hyperbole is a  Form of figurative  language like Similes and   metaphors

Hyperboles

Are used for emphasizing and  humour

In Speaking and writing.

Examples of  hyperbole

It was so cold I saw  polar bears wearing jackets.

I had a ton of  Chores to do .

She is as thin as a  toothpick

(Simile\hyperbole )

He was  skinny

Enough to jump through  a keyhole.  Her  smile  was  a mile wide .

His brain is the size of a pea you are walking

Slomack than anail.

His stomach is a bottomless  pit

I was so hungry that

I Could have  eaten an ox

Provide - Explanation .

(The Water Cycle) Introduction - Same of water - carth - created.

Water -  Very important life Survival Human beings, plants animals .

Provide - Explanation .

Water .

Recycled.

Para One Water Cycle- hydrological Cycle Cycle includes - Precipitation ,.Evaporation,

Condensation and Transpiration.

Water - changes from  liquid uid - vapour - then liquid again

Para 2

Firstly - Water lakes , Rivers , streams, Sea - Heated - evaporates

Sun

When -  evaporates

Forms - Clouds  by - Condensation

When - clouds - heavy falls - down - rain - assisted gravity

If falls  down - solid form - snow and sleet

Personification

Personification

Everyone Knows what a person is but  do you Know  What personification is ? A Personification is when you  assign human  qualities to Something

that isn’t alve . Examples of personification

1. The Stars danced playfully in the in the moonlit sky .
2. The run down House Appeared depressed.
3. The First Rays of the morning tiptoed through the Meadow .
4. The bees played hide and seek with the  flowers as they duzzed From one to another
5. The river Swallowed  the earth sa the  water Continued to rise higher and Higher .
6. The Thunder grumbled  like  an old man
7. At Precisely 6:30 am my alarm clock Sprang into life.
8. The news Took  me by Surprise
9. The Evil tree was lurking in the Shadows.

The ocean danced in the Moonlight .

Explanation Writing

Explanation Writing

Explains or tells you why or how Something Happens or Works.

Features: title tells you what the writing is about. The first paraph begins with a general opening statement e.g. in autumn, some birds migrate. A series of logical steps explaining how or why something happens. Written in the past tense. Use of time connectives e.g. then, next, several months later. Use of causal connectives e.g. because, so, this causes. Diagrams can be used together with explanation.

Correct use Cmmas

8 September 2016  

Thursday

Correct use of  Commas

1. We bought apples,pears bananas and oranges for the fruit sald

2. Although we arrived early  the restaurant was full.

3. Yes you  can put the christmas  tree up, tomorrow .

4. If you eat your Vegetables  you may have dessert.

5. Lizards snakes and  turtles are all reptiles,

joke is not good for you

Why we Should Not eat junk Food

Tasty - unhealthy high in sugar  / salt too much Sugar - do not turn off

exercise - diabetic

Diabetic \ Medication

Worse - Severe - gangrene

And wan we eat good Food  and that you can look  good and no diabetic That Part of body Operated on Leads to obesity - Verify

Lacks Vitamins and Fidra - although Full tired - quickly

And it is not good too eat junk Food or and K.F.C and Coke and Cake and ice blocks. And you should be going out to the gym  so you actually lose fat

BuT I LOVE CAKENO ok

In the World India Pakistan Sri Lanka Afghanistan Nepal. Maori pacific Islander and in nz  and  Sorry Coke and Sorry Cake  Junk Food is so not good for u and in the body and weh one will you get good  or bad I wooh sa

good and want kan of drinks and Cookies and Hunter is  love Cakes u sf eat good food And this is why you shouldn't eat junk food and you dot on want is in the Food and want food is good and bad

And I am so so not going to eat junk Food a gan ize and I am so afd of popula  good food  and not good Food and what is good food and junk  good food I haken good Food

And it is so good be kaz it is Friday  and  junk food is so not good for you and  I am so happy for my Dad he is going to the gmm. and I am going to the

Why we Should not eat junk food

Junk food must - Contain Chemicals e.g. chicken nuggets Chemicals -- food sick - caer - lead to death junk food - tasty ingredients - poor quality hamburgers poor quality meat used - do not know - which part - cow used

Spend .money-Make own hamburgers - duy meat Some - fast food outlets - poor hygiene food poisoning - Sick  

And Junk food will make u fat and the junk food is going to kill u and Chicken’s is so bad for u and junk food is inChikey n and u can eat and eat Bat you may get fat and` Coke and fanta and I am going to that

Food Caten

6 September 2016 Week 7 Tuesday

Food Caten masticated  mouth Teeth  Saliva Food Moved Back Mouth ‘ trapdoor  Saliva  Food  moued Back mouth,trapdoor-oesophagus … tongue Food  Stomach  broken down by

Digestive juices

Broken down food   Small intestine Food  moves goodness Soaked Up

Into-large water taken out

Balance energy Repair, growth blood body

Goodness left west food Excreted

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Why something happens

How something works

Present tense verbs

Time connectives: firstly,secondly features

Causal connectives:because,as a result

Topic words

Introduction

Body

Conclusion

Glossary

Diagrams

Explanation writing

A hangi is often prepared on special occasions like birthdays or christmas dinner  some people prepare

Them in different ways here is one of them.

Firstly pieces of earth are removed to make a hole

Big enough to fit the food baskets in. logs

Are placed in order  of biggest to smallest.

The rocks are added on preferably volcanic ones or else normal rocks will explode. Now the fire can be it.

The fire will blaze and smolder until the rocks  are white hot. When the fire has stopped burning, the ash and embers are now removed to a safe place to be extinguished. Next the rocks are placed in the pit and the food baskets to protect the food, then the damp sheets are put on top of the baskets to protect the foo, then the damp sacks are set down to create steam.

Dirt is placed until the steam is no longer seen. The food shouldn’t be reading until then watch tv. Finally   the Food is unearthed And Ready to eat.

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