Zoos are evil and disgusting

Zoos are evil and disgusting.

The Zoos are so not good and the Animals should Be Free and kept in the wild and I am so sad For the Animals. We Should be kind to the animals.

The zoo is is so evil one of the tigers attacked the lady and sadly she had been killed

And the Animals  Should be in Survive in the wild and I am so sad For the Animals and I am love the Animals in the Zoo bet they Should be Free

the Auckland Zoo is One not good Zoo in the World and the  Animals Should Be Free in the Wild one Animal that I like is The lion’s and BET THE AUCKLAND ZOO IS SO NOT GOOD AT LO

And wan I am 30 I am going to  go and gat  look  vo the Animals”

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The Book Came to me and my Cat wais go for a long Time  and it is sad ! and it is on Jake's Birthday is well that wal not good and men dad went day too the army and he is going for a long day

When I was 12 my dad Came Back and I was so happy  

And  then She purl the Book on Fire as time went She and Jake got older Jaek when too school is two and  he join school

Jake want to school and i am 14

And my mum she what to hospital and she is not too  good

And she is sake tam so not happy for  my mum dad is at home no the. Is at it again it is make my dad get sake  and he is going to hospital we got too go to Nanaa’s

No  dad why are you get Sake you are going too lev Nana’s is she Dend no  ho ok .

Is it the book no I pot the book in fire NO ! you do not Have and that why ? rone mum and dad mat going too Dand no I am so Sorry I no not on ti is ok the som Hppt too me Dad ? we are going to miss you

Addll yes you net too . Taught Jake too Fighting yes i'm going too good  he is gone too god and mum yes no came on it is time to go Home ok Bye mum and dad . and te ti is 20991 that is the day that they did .When I was 12 my dad Came Back and I was so happy  

And  then She purl the Book on Fire as time went and  She and Jake got older Jaek when too school is two and  he join school

Jake want to school and i am 14

And my mum she what to hospital and she is not too  good

And she is sick so not happy for  my mum dad is at home no  he.  Is not going back  again it is make my dad get sick  and he is going to hospital we got too go to Nana’s

No  dad why are you get Sick you are going to leave Nana’s is she Dead no  oh ok .

Is it the book no I pot the book in fire NO ! you do not Have and that why ? rone mum and dad mat going too Dand no I am so Sorry I no not on ti is ok the som Hppt too me Dad ? we are going to miss you

Addll yes you net too . Taught Jake too Fighting yes i'm going too good  he is gone too god and mum yes no came on it is time to go Home ok Bye mum and dad . 20991 that is want they Did . and I mes theme for I long time

And that my Nanan she is in hospital and is so sick come  on we are going to School and we are going  to Maths addll can you pek me up from School  ok oh and  Jake  yes we are going to see Nanan watn it is hometime  ok Bye sis bye boy  you have a good day

At School you too

Hi addll hi sam are you ok no my Nana is in hospital why she is Sick  I am so Sorry ti si ok my mu  she can pek you gaz up and Jake too  too the hospital and we can get Food  and we are at the hospital she is in 109

We are hi Nana I no you are going to Make ti and me and jake we are going too miss you bye  

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Narrative Writing : to Entertain entrtain

Narrative writing : to Entertain entertain

Topic : Imagine  things Start to mysteriously disappear .

One thing

disease , then another and another .Write  to tell ( narrate )  the Story

1 Brainstorm and Plan you i deas .

2 Engage you

Audience with  an interesting introduction

Parts of a Narrative

Orientation : Setting ‘ Characters

Conflict : Problem Resolution : Problem

Resolved

Features of a Narrative .

Written in Past tense Separate ideas into paragraphs Add detail to your ideas

Use of  adjectives ; Place  defoe houns.

Ues of Adverbs  

Ues of Figurative language :  Similes  mrtprs,

Different  forms of

Personification  Punctuation : speech marks , Commas

Compound Sentences

Complex     Sentences

Short snappy  Sentences .

Different Sentence Sentences

C.g Design with Time

Design   With adele's live

Depin With a diuh

Design With a preposition